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    Question

    look into my eyes and tell me
    do u cry from their beauty?
    tell me if u love me more
    than anyone from before,
    and even in the future told
    the tightest your arms will hold?
    my body, my soul...
    you will not say so,
    and even if u believe it true
    still my heart will not believe u
    for you have made the simplest mistake
    to love comfortably, not at stake,
    nothing to speak but security
    please tell me, where does your heart lead,
    truely and deeply, pry it apart
    but believe love comes from my heart
    but i, too, have made the simplest mistake,
    loving comfortably, nothing at stake.
    ~A~


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    all in all
    nice flow and feeling

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    an oldie but a goody - I miss Rose.

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